gelasius ([identity profile] gelasius.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] sacrilicious13 2007-03-20 08:55 am (UTC)

Hi! I'm here via morgandawns rec... I think... I downloaded this a few days ago and just now watched it. Anywho.

This is just gorgeously awesome in so many ways that I'm going to leave you the kind of feedback where I pluck out moments I really really loved and tell you what you already know, which is what you've done with the images:

1. Initial setup - church scenes + graveyard candlelight is both quietly lovely and kind of creepy.
2. "How low a man will stoop" = heart clutchy dramatic reaction from yours truly. DEEEEAN.
3. Each "small wild birds" introducing a new young-civvie-they-save is just perfect - it's like Meta on how they see themselves/how we see their journey all wrapped up together.
4. "The parts no one should see" - see #2, re: me. Flailing, utterly flailing.
5. Phantom Traveler bits to "the sincerity of airport kissing" strikes me too, somehow. I mean, it should be an obvious choice, but it's done just exactly right. *thumbs up*
6. Endings are important. This ending? SPOT ON. Makes me want to pet their adorable grinning faces.

So yeah. Nicely done, and you should know that this is going in my often-watched rotation of vids. :)

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